My Senses Poem by jinina fuchima rubisu

My Senses

Rating: 5.0


standing alone along the road
walking for a hundred miles
counting a million times
looking for someone
can it be you?
hearing the tick tack of my watch
as the soundtrack on the patch
feel the every beat of my heart
as i close my eyes in each day

every glimpse of my eye
li'l step of my foot
sounds that my ears hear
i know my senses will lead me to you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 24 July 2009

nice simile: ''feel the every beat of my heart as i close my eyes in each day'' nice poem.........10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 July 2009

ammmmmmmazing! ....... lovely! .......10+

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