My Shredded Mind Poem by Blake Val Noir

My Shredded Mind

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A call to arms for a shredded mind,
The hatred the blood it was not to be kind,
Nine nails plunged deep into the sea,
They were on the way to come and find me,
For fear it was that I would cry,
And never have the chance to lay and die,
It cuts it tears it way through me,
The eyes of a Trojan I do now see,
But a body of me it was once before.

I need now the thoughts of me to come forward,
The chains that cover my weary mind,
Are set in stone and make me blind,
Please please help beat the black,
So that I can sit and my body will attack.

For now the fight has ceased to be,
For all the love I am now free,
To lie in peace where I belong,
To sit and be oh so strong.

I am now at equal with myself,
And can run and play just like and elf,
The fight we gave was worthy of anyone,
So stop and be happy that I i'm now gone,
My time had come to pass away,
So be it may that I am ok.

Sunday, January 10, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 10 January 2010

An excellent well written poem, showing clearly to the entire world your great talent...Keep it up! Your are in the right track and site, PH, ..10+++Love and Peace...(The One and Only) ...

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Adens Kamwi 10 January 2010

a lovely read very well written.....

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