My Soul Travels Loooking For A Home Poem by Marquel Walker

My Soul Travels Loooking For A Home

Rating: 5.0


Some times at night i close my eyes
And listen, as my heart cries
My soul travel on this never ending road
Looking for that one place it can call home

My mind wonders why I haven't found acceptance
That's why I stay on my own
Something like independent
But I pray one day this journey would end

As i hear little whispers saying you will never succeed
I listen to it and here comes defeat
My pride is destroyed and self esteem burns slow
My soul travels looking for a home

I love it when it rains because rain is a visible emotion
it represents untold fears and hearts that was broken
What brings us to the darkest nights shines the brightest star
I know if I try I can make it far

My soul will never sleep
My heart skiips a beat
My fears would never leave
Those who are dead soon we would meet

Thursday, June 18, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: rains,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colette Grosvenor 27 September 2009

WOW! this poem is so deep and meaningful it must have really come from the heart 10/10 well done :)

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Marieta Maglas 30 June 2009

''My mind wonders why I haven't found acceptance That's why I stay on my own Something like independent But I pray one day this journey would end'' Sometimes prayer is the only solution..well written..10

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Jacob Andrew Jarman 23 June 2009

this is really powerful brilliant

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 June 2009

The soul malingering, looking for the lost ones.Good writes Marquel.

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Chitra - 21 June 2009

introspection personified...an inner turmoil which each one of us experiences well captured!

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