My Suicide Break. Poem by brittney keith

My Suicide Break.

Rating: 2.5


I wish it was all over
it would all just end
let life just take over

Life just take
all the pain away
just end all the hurt

I tell myself to
take the pills
my body listens

i fall to the floor
lay there lifeless
not breathing or moving

but nope that didnt work
so i take a blade
to my wrist

the blood flows
like a river down my arm

finally i lay there lifeless
yet again.

not to ever wake up again
to burn in the firey pits of hell.
i went aginst god.

but i was just to numb
to listen to him
but im better off
so is everyone else

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

really liked this one... But nope that didnt work... Loved that. If one thing doesnt work we move on to something that might. Thanks

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Emo Seb 01 April 2008

wow, this is an awesome poem! luv it!

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