My Suicide Break. Poem by brittney keith

My Suicide Break.

Rating: 2.5


I wish it was all over
it would all just end
let life just take over

Life just take
all the pain away
just end all the hurt

I tell myself to
take the pills
my body listens

i fall to the floor
lay there lifeless
not breathing or moving

but nope that didnt work
so i take a blade
to my wrist

the blood flows
like a river down my arm

finally i lay there lifeless
yet again.

not to ever wake up again
to burn in the firey pits of hell.
i went aginst god.

but i was just to numb
to listen to him
but im better off
so is everyone else

Wednesday, March 26, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

really liked this one... But nope that didnt work... Loved that. If one thing doesnt work we move on to something that might. Thanks

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Emo Seb 01 April 2008

wow, this is an awesome poem! luv it!

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