David Pimentel

My Undying Love

I want to sleep with her in my arms
I want to wake up before her
to take a moment to appreciate everything she devotes to me
to start her day off with an everlasting suprising kiss
to give her secruity, love, care and happiness
she is my reason for waking up tomorrow
she is gorgeous, living proof of an angel
how did I get so lucky to meet this amazing girl?
shes my peanut butter cup and I love her

Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 4, 2007
Poem Edited: Saturday, March 26, 2011

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  • frances johnson (8/11/2007 10:37:00 AM)

    Thanks babe, this is my favorite one... muah! : D

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  • Evaughn GrayEvaughn Gray (8/4/2007 11:11:00 PM)

    aww that is a very sweet poem.. i give it a ten..~hazel

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  • Louise Bloom (8/4/2007 5:46:00 PM)

    thats i really sweet poem
    lou

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  • Edna Javelosa (8/4/2007 4:57:00 PM)

    a sweet lovely tribute to a beloved..nice write..

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