My Valantine Poem by Ayan Mondal

My Valantine

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- My valantine-


In  deep silence,
My valantine is awaitting
Like the flow of river
With  sorrow more and more
The sun is bright over my head,
The sparrows are twettering outside,
It is my dream valantine.

@Ayan Mondal- 12/02/2019: : 2: 16 PM.

Tuesday, February 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 12 February 2019

O O Valentine for YOURS all of me here is waiting................

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Nikita Gupta 13 March 2019

You Should check your spellings lill one.. writer cannot make silly mistakes when he/she writes. Otherwise you write well..

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

In deep silence, My valantine is awaitting Like the flow of river With sorrow more and more The sun is bright over my head, The sparrows are twettering outside, It is my dream valantine.... ...sweet dreams..sweet thought

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Srijita Mondal 13 February 2019

Beautiful poem..'dream valentine' Dream is also our Valentine..when dies life becomes desert Beautiful lines..I must quote: " In deep silence, My valantine is awaitting Like the flow of river With sorrow more and more The sun is bright over my head, The sparrows are twettering outside"

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 February 2019

With sorrow more and more? ? ? ? no no no VALENTINE SPEAKS OF LOVE AND HAPPINESS YOU GET positive more and more Follow me and my poetry o kid for sure Not your brore look at life from a pragmatic practical sight more and more let all gals fall for you lovely child many more select only one and them assure you are teir valentine abs do assure they all will love you more and more dear kid brother

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Gajanan Mishra 12 February 2019

dream valentine, great write

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