Monday, December 15, 2014

My Void Comments

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I reach towards the sky,
but then all I see is the moon.
So the next day I reach for the stars,
but the darkness always surrounds me before I do.
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Chinedu Dike 15 December 2014

A depressed mind that languishes in a state of hopelessness well depicted in the poem. Faith is the only remedy here. FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. I like the articulation of the piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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