My Weaktion... Or Isit An Addictness? Poem by Julius Victorio

My Weaktion... Or Isit An Addictness?



Why am I soo susceptible to this stupid addictness? !
I thought I was gonna get rid of that habit I was weak-a-ted to!
It seems it's just as easy to get back
It's just like catching a cold or a flu
It's like when someone eats unhealthy foods
But it's just soo enjoyable, giving pleasure at the most
But then that someone is in fits and falls ill
And a cardiac arrest is set on the host

Now you know how bad this addiction is
But I bet your asking yourself 'what is it you shmop? ! '
'What is this weaktion your stuck to soo much? '
'It can't be worse than being bottle-a-scotch'
But it is even worse than beating the person you hate soo much with a cosh

It's called love and I'm stuck to it
You can't kill it, only help it
When that love that you loved, has decided to leave it

But really you can't leave it
Because it's like an addictness
Because the love you once loved still loves
And then it becomes a contagious sickness
Then that harmless flicker becomes a dangerous flame
And then after that, we're both ashes from whence we came
After that, then both of us are put to shame

It's an weaktion and my addictness
Okay enough with this stupidness
It's an addiction and my weakness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Love definitely makesus stupid-you captured that feeling of not being sure ifyou should make the first advances.Very good and hopefully not unrequited.

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Hey! AWWW WIKED POEM!

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Julius Victorio

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