Carlie Heart is spilt in two

My Wish - Poem by Carlie Heart is spilt in two

I wished upon a star,
last night.
I wished that you could hold,
me tight.

To hear your voice,
say something sweet
the second before
our lips meet.

To share the things
that are on my mind.
To be handsome, and sweet,
but most of all kind.

When life gets tough
to always be there.
To teach me stuff
and show that you care.

That was the wish, I wished
last night.
To find the guy...
That could hold me tight.

Comments about My Wish by Carlie Heart is spilt in two

  • (4/14/2006 11:48:00 PM)

    Lovely poem, a wish for the sensitive and thoughtful man. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/14/2006 10:41:00 PM)

    Hey Carlie
    i L-O-V-E ur poem! ! ! It's AWESOME! ! ! i luv how u can make a ryme scheme and i can't! lol they just rhyme sumhow
    luv ya way more!
    ur bestest best friend in the whole wide world! ! !
    Jade: D
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 14, 2006

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