Sunday, September 30, 2007

Mystery Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Within the mystery of shadow embracing
As I stared into the depth of your passion
When I remember you as gleams of fantasy
every word you raved flitted through my eyes
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Donna Ilene 27 July 2010

'As I stared into the depth of your passion' I was moved by the words of your fashion.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 September 2008

Very nicely presented composition.10+

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Blue angel Florida 06 October 2007

'Flouting the smiles of those who once laid Golden voices revered by the love over the myth' - 'Mystery of Love' sounds to me a missing feeling, of a person, of a feeling, of a smile...'As I stared into the depth of your eyes, when I remember you...' - Poetic and Intelligent play of words. Thanks!

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Sandra Fowler 04 October 2007

Very poignant. Deeply felt and beautifully presented. You are a gifted wordsmith. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ewigi Liebe 30 September 2007

Within the mystery of shadow embracing as i started into depth of your eyes......nice penned and very interesting piece....thanks for sharing. Mary :)

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Aldo Kraas 30 September 2007

This poem is excelent You did a fine job

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