Mystery Of Love Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Mystery Of Love

Rating: 5.0


Within the mystery of shadow embracing
As I stared into the depth of your passion
When I remember you as gleams of fantasy
every word you raved flitted through my eyes

when swayed away by sweet dreams
world of mine descends slowly heartfelt
gentle mellows long into twilight bliss
makes me trust and mused over my will.

as green of leaves wakes me up
onto the black night looking down
to the grave yard with a pangs of sorrow
i clappe out by grave being enshrined..

yet the grave wears the green of mounds
grown with grass and its blade drooping
Flouting the smiles of those who once laid
Golden voices revered by love over myth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Kraas 30 September 2007

This poem is excelent You did a fine job

0 0 Reply
Donna Ilene 27 July 2010

'As I stared into the depth of your passion' I was moved by the words of your fashion.

0 0 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 29 September 2008

Very nicely presented composition.10+

0 0 Reply
Blue angel Florida 06 October 2007

'Flouting the smiles of those who once laid Golden voices revered by the love over the myth' - 'Mystery of Love' sounds to me a missing feeling, of a person, of a feeling, of a smile...'As I stared into the depth of your eyes, when I remember you...' - Poetic and Intelligent play of words. Thanks!

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 04 October 2007

Very poignant. Deeply felt and beautifully presented. You are a gifted wordsmith. Warm regards, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Ewigi Liebe 30 September 2007

Within the mystery of shadow embracing as i started into depth of your eyes......nice penned and very interesting piece....thanks for sharing. Mary :)

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
Close
Error Success