Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,718 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

Mystery Of Love - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Within the mystery of shadow embracing
As I stared into the depth of your passion
When I remember you as gleams of fantasy
every word you raved flitted through my eyes

when swayed away by sweet dreams
world of mine descends slowly heartfelt
gentle mellows long into twilight bliss
makes me trust and mused over my will.

as green of leaves wakes me up
onto the black night looking down
to the grave yard with a pangs of sorrow
i clappe out by grave being enshrined..

yet the grave wears the green of mounds
grown with grass and its blade drooping
Flouting the smiles of those who once laid
Golden voices revered by love over myth


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  • (7/27/2010 8:06:00 PM)

    'As I stared into the depth of your passion'
    I was moved by the words of your fashion.
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/29/2008 7:00:00 AM)

    Very nicely presented composition.10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (10/6/2007 7:49:00 PM)

    'Flouting the smiles of those who once laid
    Golden voices revered by the love over the myth' - 'Mystery of Love' sounds to me a missing feeling, of a person, of a feeling, of a smile...'As I stared into the depth of your eyes, when I remember you...' - Poetic and Intelligent play of words. Thanks!
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  • (10/4/2007 1:54:00 AM)

    Very poignant. Deeply felt and beautifully presented. You are a gifted wordsmith.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (9/30/2007 5:43:00 PM)

    Within the mystery of shadow embracing as i started into depth of your eyes......nice penned and very interesting piece....thanks for sharing.
    Mary :)
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  • (9/30/2007 4:56:00 PM)

    This poem is excelent
    You did a fine job
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 30, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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