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Mystic Dancing

Rating: 4.7

Seasons vary
Tunes mutate
And I swivel.. swivel.. swivel
At the same place

I dance the mystic dancing
Elevating my hand praying to the Master
Lowering my eyes to the ground
And suffering a secret load

I humiliate myself
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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2014

I've read your beautiful poem and loved it. 'And I swivel.. swivel.. swivel At the same place' - A good expression! The last paragraph of the poem is superbly mystic.

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Dave Walker 13 March 2014

A great poem, our fate is in our hands.

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Barbara Nixon 05 March 2014

Great poem with wonderful imagery, and very well written. Inspired write!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 February 2014

Great imagery........Ahmed........dancing to please God for showers for your flowers......oh! fantastic write......... I am moved....

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 February 2014

Woah a great subliminal poem! Entertaining metaphor usage. Pls review my latest poem too

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