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An Internet Relation

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Through the internet
love haunted me again
inhabited my arteries
and congested my veins
i wanted to stop it.
who can't stop the rain?

may I seem insane
to translate the electric
and turn it romantic

but signals are electric
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Merna Ibrahim 15 June 2011

Nice topic to talk about! So, Why not...love could come through the internet, through anything..but you have to meet her more than once, to be sure from your feelings..I enjoyed the poem! Thanks for sharing =)

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Whispering Rose 23 April 2011

I love this poem, i guess many people could relate to it, me encluded at some point i like the way you gather some ordinary words and form such extraordinary expressions these lines i found fascinating 'may I seem insane to translate the electric and turn it romantic and when it is Love no one can explain'

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Basma Amir 22 March 2012

Great Work! ! ! ! ! ! and very nice poem! ! !

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Binish Cd 17 January 2012

after reading the minds of people, this fine piece of work was written..................a great work..........

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 December 2011

Wow! great poem well written...im sure many people can relate to it.

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Robinson Helela 08 December 2011

ur poem is simple and loving.i lyk the flow too! please check out my poems.

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Elena Sandu 18 July 2011

may I seem insane to translate the electric and turn it romantic but signals are electric in any heart and brain very nice written I wish to clap my hands, we can't control own heart if she wants love to spread.. but even if broken has to keep loving as once in the heart love must keep there, to grow.. Thank you for share, loved it.

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