Narcissist Poem by Fox Everett

Narcissist

Rating: 5.0


I'll start sketching a blueprint the instant I wake
Of all you can give me and all I can take.

In your taut canvas cheeks, smeared charcoal black
I see potential, if I could only just sap
That unseemly defiance
Tainting those pretty insomniac eyes—
Defiling those sweet violet petal-ringed eyes.

In my captive embrace your bones groan and break,
I do it to see if you'll bleed for my sake.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 October 2011

Wow! What a strong and straight outburst of your heart and mind! A very impressive write that clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep inspiring the World with more such talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 10 October 2011

I like the display of pride, selfishness and struggle here, another good product from this industry....

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