My ocean
Swell, swirl
Push, pull
Drag, drown
Cry, chaos
Sink or swim
In my ocean
There is something refreshing about the ocean even when it is threateningly rough and tumble. Fine poem, a lesson for Narissa.
nice, reminds me of surfing pipeline waves for the first time here in Hawaii.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Warm welcome to the world of poets. Your very first verse bagged a score of 9 out of 10. A nice work. Life is also an ocean. It depends on us as to how we manage to be peaceful and happy in the ocean.