Narissa Part 1 Poem by Casey Lou

Narissa Part 1

Rating: 4.5


My ocean
Swell, swirl
Push, pull
Drag, drown
Cry, chaos
Sink or swim
In my ocean

Tuesday, July 3, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: ocean
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Warm welcome to the world of poets. Your very first verse bagged a score of 9 out of 10. A nice work. Life is also an ocean. It depends on us as to how we manage to be peaceful and happy in the ocean.

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William Jackson 03 July 2007

There is something refreshing about the ocean even when it is threateningly rough and tumble. Fine poem, a lesson for Narissa.

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Yao Tzu 03 July 2007

nice, reminds me of surfing pipeline waves for the first time here in Hawaii.

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Casey Lou

Casey Lou

Redding, Ca
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