Monday, June 22, 2015

Nature Comments

Rating: 4.3

Miles away from these burdens
I am looking out, out from my windows curtains,
Today I am dreaming, dreaming like a bird.
And I feel like flying uphigh in the sky.
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Zainab rasool
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A A Umar Udubo 14 November 2015

I also feel like sliding to and fro as my whole self plays in your masterly put expressions. I don't know which image is more attracting, the bird, the sky, or the voice of the persona? Zainab thanks for Sharing.

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Shawnif Khursheed 24 June 2015

Nice poem.

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 22 June 2015

This is beautiful, well done Zainab, A 10. Please read my poem 'The Empress Of My Heart'

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