Nature's Ballad-Alien Daze Poem by alien daze

Nature's Ballad-Alien Daze

Rating: 5.0


Sitting in the grass listening to the trees
Soaking up the sunshine and laughing with the wind.
Nature abides by no laws but her own
Growing free and wild she offers protection to all
Whosoever searches for refuge is welcome no matter
Their background, what they've done or who they've hurt.
Sitting in the grass, flying with the breeze
Staring at the moon who calls me child.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first published poem anywhere! I hope that the community is a welcoming one and that I may continue to post :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautiful poem. Most pertinent issue, forcefully expressed. Top score.

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alien daze 01 June 2022

got it! thank you for being so kind and helpful!

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Nature abides by no laws other than her own. Every living thing need to live by these laws, or they perish. But man no only violates these laws, but violates nature itself. So, nature perishes. And with it, man too.

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alien daze 01 June 2022

ah I see. thank you for your insight! it'll help me correct my form : )

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