Thursday, May 12, 2022

Nature's Ballad-Alien Daze Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting in the grass listening to the trees
Soaking up the sunshine and laughing with the wind.
Nature abides by no laws but her own
Growing free and wild she offers protection to all
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Beautiful poem. Most pertinent issue, forcefully expressed. Top score.

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alien daze 01 June 2022

got it! thank you for being so kind and helpful!

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Nature abides by no laws other than her own. Every living thing need to live by these laws, or they perish. But man no only violates these laws, but violates nature itself. So, nature perishes. And with it, man too.

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alien daze 01 June 2022

ah I see. thank you for your insight! it'll help me correct my form : )

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