Thursday, September 11, 2014

Natures Delight's Comments

Rating: 4.0

I was walking along the footpath

Leading to the local park
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Kaila George
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Kevin Patrick 17 September 2014

That wouldn't happen to be the same dog that filled your dream with doggy kisses wouldn't it? lol Lovely descriptions of your environment, it wasn't rythmatical but their was lyrical and evocative. Made me think of some of my favourite Pink Floyd songs. I'll take nature over relationship poems any day. Fantastic

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Gary H 15 September 2014

Nice, well said and true.

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