Near The Ocean Comments

What bird is this? Where is it from? Its half screwed wings point at my slacken heart, Telling me how unworthy I am only to look at oddities of life. The shores and waves told me to move on. What worse could happen? Yes move on dear poetess. Never give up. you have so much to think and write. you have poetic soul. write and write and find yourself in writing. tony

Beautiful poem

Very impressive write, Bidisha Sharaf. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.