Neighbours Unwanted Poem by Dibakar Sarkar

Neighbours Unwanted

Rating: 5.0


1.
… The date when the first dead body fell
on the household yard, in the household garden

… The date when an acute power cut took place
in the household, out in the shop

The neighbours didn’t feel a fire for seeking any reasons


2.
I felt something strange...
a question with its wounded words

How are you?

Then, on the roads,
broke out frozen balls of ammunition, siren, and fire

Then, crept out
Blood, out of your hands and mixed with sweat and salt

I caught your frank fall with my armlessness,
and felt an erection
and smelt the perfume loud in between your thighs


3.
Nine rounds of bullets went out in rage
Rifles shot a heavy gust

Women butchered
Children butchered
... in the bloodstained draught

I gave my patriotism a pat
And into my room myself dispatched

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roshni D'Souza 17 August 2009

Impressive write with good choice of diction, not only for what is said, but also for things left unsaid. Thanks, roshni.

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Seema Aarella 17 August 2009

A different read! ....interesting!

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Patrick A. Martin 17 August 2009

Now this is really good but must be read twice. the first time to read it the second time to admire it.

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