bloodshed outdoors
worship indoors
i should listen to
either of the two
either
you close the door
or
close
either of the bloodshed and worship
please worship bloodshed
close bloodshed worship
close bloodshed please
please worship close
close the heart
that hurts
close the eyes
that blind
close the ears
that hear
close the nose
that smells
close the tongue
that tinges
close i, myself and me
close me, myself, i
close myself, i and me
close i and me, myself
i like the way the words flow, nice job dear, keep writing dont close
let my heart close and mind open...culture taught us all what faith says.... all have just comes in its own way.....your a poet of a vision....i salute your style....the each line reveals...thank you and GOD BLESS you....my salute my friend....a 10 +++++
The write up is good. It would be better if u modify your last stanza Regards, Sikta
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well a little confusing for me. the last para is perplexing. 'close i, myself and me close me, myself, i close myself, i and me close i and me, myself ' voted10 surya