Monday, July 15, 2019

Nervous Wreck Comments

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I am weak and waiting
but I'm a nervous wreck
I'm waiting to be filled
like an empty vessel
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Mona Lisa Aspiras
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Unnikrishnan E S 06 August 2019

Part 2 Thus, I take it as poem exuding positive energy. The capability to find positive energy in times of stress shows a strong character, which I appreciate.

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 August 2019

Feeling of deep melancholy touchingly expressed. But, the lines “I am waiting to be filled Like an empty vessel” is an expression of openness, readiness to receive what life has to offer. Even if it is the ashes of Vesuvius...

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