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Never Love A Girl - Poem by lost soul

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'I knew she'd break my lonely heart,
and leave me feeling sad!

and I knew that I would fall apart!
I never hurt so bad!

But I was oh so young, .

and I was such a fool,

to love a pretty girl like her
who broke all the rules! '

......And it all began one summer's eve
when I met her at a dance.
When I looked into her deep blue eyes
I never stood a chance.
And I should've known, someone like me
she could never love,
But I wasn't doing much thinking
with the moon and stars above.

And all those nights I loved her,
and held her close to me,
And every night she whispered back
that she would never leave.
and I should've known, but I was young
and believed all the lies,
for how could I know that she would go
when I looked into her eyes.

And now she's gone and in my mind
I'l remember her til the end,
but I can't cry, my heart is gone
I'l never love again!

At 25, I met my wife
by now you'd think I'd know,
not to love a girl who'd break my heart
and leave me all alone.
She promised, that she'd treat me kind,
she swore she'd never leave,
so I should've known, she'd find someone
to love instead of me.
And now she's gone, and in my mind
her words I always hear,
but in my eyes and in my pain
there'l never be a tear!
because I can't cry, my heart is gone
though I'l miss her til the end.
My soul has died! ! my life is gone!
I'l never love again!

Now, the years have all gone by,
I sit and wonder why,
no girl will ever love me
until the end of time.
And I force myself to sleep each nite
and wake before its light,
in no one's arms to hold me tight
and make me feel alright.
But I can't cry, my heart is gone
and I'l remember it til the end,

so help me God, I'l never love
another girl again.!


Comments about Never Love A Girl by lost soul

  • (7/19/2011 12:16:00 AM)


    Never say never... rule number 1
    (To) live for love, with hope &joy....nr.2
    in everything is/ must be... a good side, be optimistic! ... another rule...
    every soul must be... a half of the whole

    beautifully done!
    10/10
    :))
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  • Jessica Lima (5/15/2011 7:42:00 PM)


    Have you stoped to think that maybe just maybe God is trying to tell you something.
    Not that love is a bad thing bcause he loved us to the end. He was trying to show you that those girls wren't created for you. They were not your soulmate. *yeah, i do believe in soulmates! *
    God has someone right for you, and she will appear in the right time.Stop looking let her come to you!
    Remember that god told us to forgive 70x7 time. Meaning: always
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  • Kristina Carr (5/10/2011 9:19:00 PM)


    So sad and full of vivid emotions - I can see the pain in your writing. Great work.

    Please remember that love can be found in moments - it's easier to go on from there.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 19, 2011


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