If ever one makes
a promise
one must keep it
And my real sincere advice is
never make it
coz often than not
you can't keep it
you promised to come again to my page,
but I ain't no page
Why the rage..
I was just reviewing how many poems have been unread...
but here I see youhad Sir read...
my regrets
I did not know..Hence a delayed show..
My thanks you know all I sincerely owe..
And about my first school girl friend
all wanted to know...
my earliest girl friends in school was
DAWN
she did me lovingly adorn
adorn but to marry her
I wasn't born
She was very exquisitely beautiful
andvery rich
O what a girl Dawn she was
I miss her still
morn after morn
Oh Father
why was I born,
if you wanted me to
miss my Dawn
morn after morn
But as now time has lapsed
and
gone
since very long
Now I do not her absence mourn
as to someone more deserving
she must nowbelong
Time down Thames has
muchly gone
Lovely poem and very beautiful picture.i enjoy this poem.thanks for sharing this poem 10+++
You rekindle those moments of ecstasy - - which i suffered - -as in my youth... You have the notes/vibes of a lover too - -RR ''''- - of you both Dawn and I wouldv'e be proud..even if she were to return for a moment ere comes my last dawn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
my earliest girl friends in school was DAWN she did me lovingly adorn adorn but to marry her I wasn't born......loved these lines. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.10
Sir but for you- - - I wouldn't be a poet.... You charm me so much... like did Dawn or better still morning and evening equal ''TWILIGHT''.... Dawn out of my life has gone...for her I wasn't ever born..so why should i now mourn Dawn has come and gone