Give Peace A Chance Poem by me poet yeps poet

Give Peace A Chance

Rating: 4.5


It is cold, very cold
freezing temperatures
a mild drizzle
yet unmindful
she stands silently
like a statue
under the isolated tree

all about her come and see
why such depth of silence
they wonder who is she
so very sweet and lovely
fine
a veritable divine

her eyes don't blink
statue stark
into the daylight distant
rare vision
no one knows
where she is looking

yet her mission
is just to draw
a large searching crowd
who will come and see
her blankly
looking into eternity
towards the distant horizon
wilderness
mind totally blissfully absent

all come and shed a tear
many say smile, O dear
she has a silent demeanor
yet she conveys
why this war and trouble

Give Peace a Chance
A tear does trickle

Then ups her umbrella
Mission complete
It now snows incessantly
She's conveyed her message

from Canada

Monday, February 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,peace,peace day,peaceful,poetic expression,war and peace,love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
Give Peace a Chance
was composed over a year ago
It is most relevant
today
the World over

WITH LOVE FROM CANADA
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 February 2019

In this war torn society, this message of peace is the most wanted thing! The lady who is silent powerfully conveys this message of peace shedding tears from her eyes! You have beautifully drawn a touching and vibrant portrait! Top marks!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 April 2019

THANKS VG THE LADY REAL ONE NOW IS HISTORY Sorry for the delayed thanks today I am only brooming older poetry came by urs thanks

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yes but the lady lived long ago The message stays but none follow Thanks for sparing time, ma'am

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me poet yeps poet 20 February 2022

THANKS A LOT NOT HEARD FROM YOU SINCE......

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me poet yeps poet 14 March 2022

VALSA JI MANY HAVE YET TO READ PH IS SLOWING

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Nabakishore Dash 08 July 2022

An excellent and timely write dear poet when peace is in the back seat.The world is moving towards destruction by some people who like war and power.Your write is for doing good to the creation.Top scores.

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me poet yeps poet 26 June 2022

my most well read poem world wide 5.1 k reads adding on dailly must upgrade and read

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me poet yeps poet 09 April 2022

no fresh readers what do you say

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Gayatri Phukan 18 March 2022

Beautiful poem. Thank you dear poet

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me poet yeps poet 14 December 2021

KINDNESS TO ALL

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