Never Really Knew Poem by lanesa mantia

Never Really Knew

Rating: 4.5


I got these crazy feeling that I've never had,
and when i think about him, oddly I feel glad.

Why do I feel like this,
why can I only think about his kiss.

Never really knew we'd be more than friends,
I want us to last but it all depends.

He only makes me smile,
and when he leaves im sad for a while.

Never really knew that I would fall for you,
never really knew that you would fall for me too.

We're two halfs that make a whole,
because he completes my half broken soul.

Monday, April 19, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: crazy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

try to add some more..you're really good at writing, but when you write you must take care that the 80% belongs to what you wana say and 20% must belong to what others feel.. Keep it up..i really like the way you wrote it..but it was lacking something.. Best wishes to you :)

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