New Born! Poem by Said El Banna

New Born!

Rating: 5.0


Really my love was born a second ago
When touched your lips
it was as a fire of love
you were as volcanic love
explode in me and made
me melted inside you
I knew you as a first time
you have everything I needed
but not hide your great emotion from me
my angel. God send you, for only me
I have all for you
Kiss you and hug me, so we one body
one soul for ever....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 09 February 2009

Doing great now sir...Kiss you and hug me, so we are one body, one soul forever...nice ending. Beautiful opus with the simplicity of words flow so naturally in a free verse form...10

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