Monday, August 18, 2008

New Dew Comments

Rating: ★3.5

Why dose this always happen?
I feel so alone.
Though I know it should not matter.
But it still bothers me that you are not there.
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Whinny Baybay
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 August 2008

There is a reference to new dew. That is about it as far as structure is concerned. Meaning is in there as well but it is really not focused. We know she wants him to be with her but beyond that the writing is not organized. There is not much here to recommend. GW62

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