Najib Altawell


New Life - Poem by Najib Altawell

A bright light burst in a 'dream'
Carved a shape
In 'total darkness'
Creating fire
Far and near



A spark from the light suddenly trapped
In a grey cubic strange place
'Dissolve' slowly then 'appear'
In a large blue empty sphere
Attached within
A yellow green dense realm



The lost spark has 'no control'
When a planet physical force
'Imprison' within with 'full control'
Embedding itself in a virgin matter
Giving life to a
'physical forms'



The old spirit sparks fire
In the emerging
'New soul'
Starting life in a fresh form
A thirst for life with physical role
Striving to
Fulfil lingering desires
'Beyond control'
Repeating again
The cycle of birth
The cycle of death
Here and
There
Once more


Comments about New Life by Najib Altawell

  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/9/2010 7:58:00 PM)


    A bright light burst in a 'dream'
    Carve a shape
    In a 'total darkness'
    Creating fire far and near

    Very mature bruise into the cruise of new life.10/10 again
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 5, 2012


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