Najib Altawell


New Day With Diamonds - Poem by Najib Altawell

Diamonds on black velvet
Danced between the fingers
Bursting with brilliant light
In a summer
Breezy
Cool
'Starry' night


Rahmanov classical music
Born gracefully
Out of a silver box
Enveloping
Marrying
The hearts and
The minds


Crocodile decorated skin
Rest on a Persian carpet
Marking the entrance to
An arched bended passage
Mysteriously
Half Darkened
Faintly Lighted
With lamps
On each side


Roses blouses shirts and bushes
Suddenly shine reflecting light
When everyone moves
Side by side
A little tight
As the place
Filled with
'Excite'


The lower part of the heavenly dome
Brushed with a touch of pale light
Signalling silently the approaching
Dawn
Droplets dews on stems and
Petals
Moves down with birds
Songs
Singing Greeting Blessing and Telling
That a new day is
Surely
'Coming'


Comments about New Day With Diamonds by Najib Altawell

  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/9/2010 7:53:00 PM)


    'Starry' night


    Rahmanov classical music
    Born gracefully...................reminds me of a persian number-azize delami.......


    Pcituresque poem, burlesque flow--barbeque for readers.10/10 Sir.
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  • (1/30/2010 10:33:00 PM)


    Your lovely poem has nice imagery & a great natural flow to it. Thanks for sharing.

    Spiritsong
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010



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