Saturday, March 12, 2016

New Millenniums Curse Comments

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Compression ingestion
The world starts to implode
The numbers insipient
—any space now in rows
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Kurt Philip Behm
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Mike Smith 12 March 2016

Great poem. The rhyme scheme softens the blow so while reading you don't have to feel guilty to even exist in such a time. Your words are true. We make progress each day, but the digress that we make cancels it out. From diamond to carbon indeed. Nicely done Kurt.

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Kurt Philip Behm 12 March 2016

Thanks Mike, you really 'got' it. Kurt

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