New Slogan Poem by Kevin Patrick

New Slogan

Rating: 5.0


Always a slogan but rarely evoking

Its cheap talk
with no pulse
from scholars with discounts


Lets make the world a better place for our children

Its The proud rhetoric
from the moral couch potatoes

Instead
It should read

Lets make the world a better place for ourselves

That way
we wont have
four or five generations
saying the same thing
ad nauseum
until there's nothing left
for anyone

Sunday, December 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: environment,human,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 18 January 2016

Very enlightening and insightful poem. I like your message, if we make the world a better place for ourselves, our children will never have to repeat what we're saying now about making it a better place for we will have made a better place for them already. Really great poem! Give it a 10 and adding it to my poem list. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 January 2016

Lets make the world a better place for our children. Environment should have love and children should get much benefits. Very amazing sharing done definitely. Wisely penned poem.10

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