New Start Haiku Poem by Yana Djin

New Start Haiku



when illusions burst
you freeze. stand still.
all you remember is how to loose.
and the feel of the noose
doesn't evoke a chill.

nonexistence beckons
its colors - transparent, none.
like an elusive Beckett
after Godot was gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 14 March 2009

Hi! I was expecting a haiku made of 17 syllables.....I was looking for that kind of pieces....anyway thanks for sharing your creations.

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