Nicklas Poem by Nick Leow

Nicklas

Rating: 5.0


Night alone felt lonely.
It isn't as quiet as I thought.
Counting the stars one by one.
Knowing the night will be over soon.
Letting gentle wind bring away the loneliness.
Ascending slowly up the ancient tree.
Stars shine their own light, follow their own path and for that, I like the night.

Tuesday, June 5, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: acrostic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The first poem I had written when I was 13.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Medina 05 June 2012

Very well crafted for a first poem.

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