Night Walking Out Poem by Noor Noor

Night Walking Out

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While walking in slumber, I got stumbled
Somehow, I stopped by a railway's track
Overloading with clouds dark, sky fumbled
Moon shut the eyes and kept on hiding behind so thick bushes.
Stars disappeared....!
Gasping air I took a fair glance.
Around me brown, grey, spiky colorless and distorted,
though big and small these stones were all,
Inapt to move anywhere in hushed air, lying;
in and alongside the rusty track of station.
Heedlessly watching the arrival and the departure
of such tardiest trains.
In wilderness I felt as if Im getting benumbed.
In no time, an angry wild rail bus crossed,
Leaving behind a desperate me as a distressed wandering soul.
I asked myself am I still sleeping?
Oh, it started raining, pouring on me droplets
It's making me get fixed, as statu do in the graveyard of fear,
just to stand and stare
May be, Over the lamenting stones here...!

Night Walking Out
Monday, December 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Some dreams don't end even when we open our eyes!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 24 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Noor. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Noor Noor 03 October 2017

yeah sure.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 December 2016

Life in this world, still we enjoy life.

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Noor Noor 19 December 2016

This world is like a rail track...people have to walk on it either by sleeping or by awaking and the dream of death is always hunting.

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