Monday, April 4, 2011

Nightmare Comments

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Darkness surrounds me, completely shrouded,
Thinking and movements totally clouded
Try to run but my legs go weak
I hear movement, the stairs creak
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Unwritten Soul 03 August 2012

WOW this is the real nightmare, was this in your real experience coz it really scary....but for the beautiful imagery and realistic you deserve high marks! ! ! nice poem but it really a nightmare hahaha_Unwritten Soul

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Lureen Kithen 05 April 2011

Creepy, yet, cool. I like this poem.

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