Nine Days To Silence - Day One Poem by Alan Reynolds

Nine Days To Silence - Day One



I retreat a final time back to The Farm.
I cross the creek down where the real road ends.
I walk from there, into the ever woods.
I ford the creek twice more and see the sun.
It cooks the dew from what had been the orchard.
The path is steeper than I had remembered.
A blacksnake on an overhanging rock
conceals her rapt astonishment if any.

Back into the dark forest. Does it end?
I work to think of nothing but I remember:
projects well begun but then abandoned,
salt traces on the cheek of one I loved.
The sun again. I step into the clearing
remembering it was here I learned to ride
with hope and halter, quirt and bit forbidden.
I used a blanket for a saddle on hot days.

Emotions I thought atrophied propel me
uphill to where the cabin's rough-plank porch
was the perch I launched myself from in the dawn
before walking through the weeds that wet bare feet
to wade the creek and watch for rainbow trout
that faced upstream below the larger rocks.
On nearing, I see saplings, dirt, and weeds.
The cabin I planned to move into is gone.

Friday, November 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: home
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 28 June 2015

Very intense imagery and accurate depiction of the past as we remember it, then trying to relive it by going to the places we remember and nothing is there for us to go back to. Love this poem, and identify with it's final sorrow of nothing left but the memory. Great poem, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Alan Reynolds 29 June 2015

Thank you for your read and comment on this one.

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