Tuesday, October 25, 2011

No Longer Loving You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I put my trust in you and you lied to me.
i felt those words deep inside of me.
you lied and tried to hide it from me the fact that you was messing around with her.
Love is a study word that boys always say.
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Yamone Stephens
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Romeo Della Valle 25 October 2011

Wow! Outburst of your broken heart vividly expressed through this powerful, well penned and poignant write that opened the wide door of the Poetry World for you! Welcome! I identify with your feelings now (In Pursuit of Happiness) and I hope you have the time to read some of my poems and you will see clearly that I went through that already and I found the ways to put my past behind and move on! Now, it is your turn and you have the will and strength (Inner Strength) to do that! 10+++God Bless You, Yamone! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Vipins Puthooran 25 October 2011

Faith and truth will be the things to hold your love as pure and serene! A nice poem!

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