No More Hurt Poem by lacy evans

No More Hurt

Rating: 5.0


You tell me you love me
But you really don't....
I say it back to you
But now i won't....
As i look up at he sky
I wonder how you ever made me cry....
But now i won't
Because you don't....
I will not cry now
As i look at the sky....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 21 May 2010

Nice work...and the emotion is so real...U know what, you deserve someone better and true love, just let go of yesterday because next day may bring u something better... No more stuck with someone who not appreciate your love because u are so much better compare to that kinda person... Keep looking sky...ok..good work

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Crazy Vampire 21 May 2010

this is good...ive felt like that before...hang in there...oh and keep writing...ur work is good

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