No One Came Poem by jennifer jane pryce

No One Came



Did anyone see me yesterday?
I was here and outside and ready to play
I had my ball and my trainers on
And was waiting to see who would come along

I stood for a long time and watched and waited
Looked left and looked right
And in loads of places
But no-one appeared for simply ages

I was sure they had said to meet me here
So I waited alone for someone to appear
I was feeling a fool, lonely and cold
I was sure this place was the place I was told

I took a wander around the park
I stayed there a long time until it got dark
Then I got scared and just ran away
Tomorrow someone will come out to play.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brooke Dietz 17 January 2008

this id really good i like the message if i got it right it has a presence

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Rani Turton 12 January 2008

This poem is very good and reminds me of the Cat Stevens song 'Where do the children play' if I get the meaning right. Kids don't play out anymore because of changing times, insecurity and so many other reasons.

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jennifer jane pryce

jennifer jane pryce

Kent, England now living in Scotland
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