No One Cares For You Poem by Sucrose White

No One Cares For You

Rating: 5.0


No one but you seems to care
About you girl
No body but you dares
to flatter you're browny curls

Like the statue you stand alone
counting the days of your life
You're heart with the wind has gone
leaving you're lover with strife

I've been tired wiping off your tears
My hands have gone wrinkled
Besides, confronting your fears
I couldn't just mingle

I'm loosing my life with you
While seeing you terminated
A seed represents you
one can never be germinated

Your past will forever follow you
cuz You are the past itself
It's tough like a mule
but u should blame yourself

What's the point of pulling me back?
to the pool you're drowning in
My heart for you is about to get cracked
that you should seek an inn

Never will you survive again
in a world where you're dead
never will you feel the rain
if you're under shed

I'm ready to sacrifice my life for you
if yours shall live
But why should I do it for you?
If yours will never ever live

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Full of depth and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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