No One Has A Perfect Life. Poem by Arianne Owens

No One Has A Perfect Life.

Rating: 4.0


She's known for her kindness,
She's known for her looks,
always wears a smile,
always with a friend,
has the cutest clothes,
has a perfect family.
No one really knows her, no one knows her life.
She's kind to everyone because she can't risk any more enemies.
she was made fun of when she was little over her weight, she still believes it all.
She always wears a smile, she saves the tears for night
always with a friend, she's paranoid when she's alone
her clothes, half of them are stolen
she lives with her aunt, hardly talks with her parents.
You never really know someone, There's always that little secret.
Everyone has trouble in their life, no one's life is perfect, don't believe it for a second.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
to those who hide their lives behind a smile, you're not alone, pick yourself up you're to strong to fall now.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Impressive display of free-verse...textbook job! ~FjR~

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Impressive penning...fine display of textbook free-verse

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Saadat Tahir 18 June 2012

she fits the other shoe of! ............... Cinderella, , , , , :) isnt it so liked yer impressive lil monologue cheers

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Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan 04 October 2012

I love the note you dropped on the poem. And for the poem, a very good lesson to learn from. Hey tell me you've experienced much! Anyway just joking. Permit me in this short cantos appreciate the dropping of thy words like the sweet humming of the birds chanting the early morning serenades. Never mind. Great work you have there.

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Dominic Hontonnu 22 June 2012

i like it n hey hope U¯_??° will read mine thanks

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Kevin Halls 21 June 2012

A good insight into human life, we all show a different face in different situations and meeting new people. And all have secrets too! Nice poem.

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Tolulope Modupe 20 June 2012

Wow! I really love this poem..it shows the true nature of humanity..

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Wang Qian 18 June 2012

I like your sensitive intuition on your words, description, and your feeling towards people and life~~ Thank you for sharing!

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