Friday, February 9, 2007

No Other Place Comments

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Early morning I see your face
This is where I belong, No other place

Morning coffee, Waking pace
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Brian Jones
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Grace Tan 09 February 2007

A sweet poem! Talks about a lovely affection. I like your use of repitative ornament in 'No other place', having mentioned it in both the first and last stanza as well as in the title. A simple poem with sweet command.

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