Thursday, May 3, 2007

No Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cat knows
to curl in the sunlight,
seize the moment.
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Ben Gieske
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Jemarie Ragudo 01 December 2007

Your third paragraph carries a profound meaning not only in the animal world. I like the philosophical touch you lace your poems with. Another 10.

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Janice Windle 22 October 2007

This is clever, funny and thoughtful. Your use of contrasting ideas (shadow/sunlight and so on) is so appropriate to your subject. Good use of a dificult form that I've never even experimented with - I'm inspired to try!

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Cellar Door 03 May 2007

I do too. Great poem.

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