The cat knows
to curl in the sunlight,
seize the moment.
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This is clever, funny and thoughtful. Your use of contrasting ideas (shadow/sunlight and so on) is so appropriate to your subject. Good use of a dificult form that I've never even experimented with - I'm inspired to try!
Your third paragraph carries a profound meaning not only in the animal world. I like the philosophical touch you lace your poems with. Another 10.