No Return Poem by jan oskar hansen

No Return

Rating: 5.0


Sea-shell tells of hard life’s ocean
calming when reaching Nirvana’s
pristine strand.

Nuns in a rowing boat smile, terns
float on silent air, no tempest can
reach this shore.

Sun is bland, leave passion behind
when wading ashore, here where
no one whispers of hidden delight

Scintillating sun upon sea, music
reaches my ears…too late now,
god sits on a stone… motionless.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 08 February 2007

The imagery is precise and the scenery cogent. Life ashore! Great poem. Rgds, Ivan

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