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She whispers in
through
Keyholes that hold so many doors upright.
She speaks aloud in dreams.
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Thomas Bates
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Bri Edwards 11 June 2014

what shall i say to this? i don't claim to understand it. it is not funny, like many of mine are, but i won't hold that against you. it also doesn't have rhymes; wait, let me look again to be sure. nope. i don't think it is a love poem. i don't care for love poems usually, so this is good! it is followed by a poet's note. that i do appreciate. my favorite lines are: shades of blue & softer, lighter green i'd have to say i DO enjoy reading it. thanks for sharing. welcome to PoemHunter aka PH. bri :)

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