No Title, Just Heartache Poem by Ali Cay

No Title, Just Heartache

Rating: 4.3


Once intertwined paths, Fate has now separated us like forks..
i miss it, i miss it all.
cause when i dream of you, thats the only time we talk..and i feel so much pain
i start to weep, words don't come out of my mouth at all...so i lay in silence, staring into the ceiling wall.

Saturday, February 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Memories
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Take it as u feel it, If this poem relates to you in anyway. Then that is the story.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suburban Lovechild 07 February 2015

I feel it...powerless and violated by fate...

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 07 February 2015

Sad feeling expressed well.

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