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something i was scribbling along a bus journey.

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ur truth is like the lie i live with everyday,
ur eye is like the blindfold i have on my eyes,
ur voice is like the eternal silence of mine,
ur soul is like the emptiness i bear within........

ur music is like the noise around my ear,
ur air is like the stench of guilt in me,
ur bliss is like the raging pain inside me,
ur sweat is like the blood within my veins..........

ur flight is like the fall of a thousand feet for me,
ur dream is like the worst nightmare i would ever have,
ur surprise is like the horror of a lifetime,
ur tear is like the other ocean for me..........

yet........

ur single word is like the poetry of mine,
ur humming is like the rhythm of the songs heaven sings,
ur touch is like the relief i would have on my wounds,
ur smile is like the arc that would save me from destruction,

ur beauty is like the mask to my ugliness,
ur reality is like the dream of longing years,
ur light is like the sunshine of an open blue sky,
ur love is like the sanity i long to achieve since birth,

ur time is like the empty stretch of space i hold,
ur color is like the hues of emotions that paint my soul,
ur love is like the glory that would shine on my shoulder,
ur completeness is like the filler of my incomplete self,

yet.........

I lay here incomplete, coz
ur priority is like the failing list for me,
ur minute is like the waiting of many lives to come,
ur ignorance is like the silent death for me,
ur incompleteness is like the empty shell i have become.....

yet....................
ur completeness is like the filler of my incomplete self.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nia Riz 16 November 2008

U CAN CALL IT... UR THIS...I AM THAT... lol...i m nt gettin nythin! !

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shygirl 93 15 November 2008

you should call it ur my

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