Jayatissa Liyanage

Gold Star - 33,451 Points (21st June / Walasmulla, Sri Lanka)

Non-Optional Choice - Poem by Jayatissa Liyanage

Falling rain drops
Bashes on ground splashing itself
Along with some silt and sand off ground
Makes rainbow bubbles floating about
Only on puddles, but not in drains

Topic(s) of this poem: nature


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Comments about Non-Optional Choice by Jayatissa Liyanage

  • Valsa George (12/30/2015 12:28:00 AM)


    ........... and it is children who enjoy the rainbow bubbles the most which are seen around puddles! A fascinating phase of Nature when it rains is beautifully captured! (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (11/25/2015 11:43:00 AM)


    I'm sure you meant puddles. A very evocative poem. Thanks, Jayatissa. (Report) Reply

    Jayatissa K. Liyanage Jayatissa K. Liyanage (11/25/2015 7:05:00 PM)

    Oh yes, Kelly; How bad it is to make such omissions! Thanks very much for your correction.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 25, 2015


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